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Year 4-6、7-9、10-12 の実際のライティング課題と模範解答全文、それぞれの良さの解説つき。

当サイトの Year 4-6 ライティング練習 1(無料)の実際の課題と、最低 150 語に対する 170 語の模範解答、そしてその良さの解説です。

テンプレート · 課題

You have transferred to a new school, which is quite far away from your home. Your teacher asked you to tell your classmates how you go to school every day. In your short speech, you should mention the following points:
• How far away is your home from the new school
• What is your No.1 choice of transport
• If there was no public transport one day, what would you do
• Do you think your trip to school would be happier if you could go with a classmate or some friends

テンプレート · 模範解答(170 語)

My new school is about twelve kilometres from my home, so I cannot walk there any more. The trip takes me almost forty minutes every morning.

My first choice of transport is the bus. Bus number 22 stops two streets from my house and goes straight past the school gate. It is cheap, it is warm in winter, and I can read my book while I travel.

Sometimes the buses do not run, for example when there is a storm or the drivers are on strike. If that happens, my father drives me on his way to work. If he has already left, I ride my bicycle, although then I have to leave home half an hour earlier.

I would certainly be happier if I travelled with a friend. A long trip alone is boring, but with a classmate I can talk, practise my English and share my snacks. Last week a girl from my class got on at the same stop, and the journey felt much shorter than usual.

良いところ

  • 課題に挙げられた順番どおりに 4 つの項目を扱っているので、漏れがありません。
  • 'far' や 'long' のようなあいまいな言葉ではなく、具体的な情報(twelve kilometres、bus 22、forty minutes)を使っています。
  • まとめではなく小さな具体例で締めくくっているので、読んでいて面白くなっています。